Today, in our country, we are having some
experience about our lifes. Because of the “Gezi parkı” in Taksim, some people
just protest the government so that they can not build a shopping mall there.
The protest increased and spread all over the country. Millions of people were
on the streets and some people thought that this was just because of Gezi
Parkı. When we looked at the streets, we heard kitchenware sounds, people were
screaming, etc. It looks like a chaos. When you see it deeply, you understand
that this is not just because of Gezi Parkı. This is all about human life and
freedom of people. Every people in protests, has a reason for protest against
government. Some of them are here because of their sexual choice, some them are
here because of their low salary, some them are here because of limitation of
alcohol sale. Person who drinks alcohol is here, person who sells alcohol is
here. Whole society has a reason for being here. When we see this crowd, we
understand just one thing: freedom is our aorta. Maybe some can touch it, push
it, but when it comes at the end of some’s rope, whole people go out.
When we look at them, we can see
fellowship between people. There is no bad behaviors, there is no fights, there
is no anger. Every one of society knows why he is here. Because he does not
want to be limited. Only angry person in the country is on the television and
calls people “çapulcu”. It shows that this people are on the right way.
In this world, every people has his own
decision mechanism and every people should protect his freedom of thought. If
he doesnt resist any of the borders, one day he will realize that he cant move.
Dear Evren,
YanıtlaSilFirstly, I would like to say that I really enjoyed while reading your entry. You have mentioned a good point. You provided everybody an opportunity to know what happened in Turkey. Also, you have stated protesters’ aim explicitly. Moreover, you have a nice style of writing. Namely, you have developed your ideas in an organized way, with paragraphs. There are no irrelevant sentences. With respect to your language use, there are some mistakes I would like to state. “Chaos” is an uncountable noun, so you can’t use it with the article “a”. You said “There is no bad behaviors” ,and it should be “There are no bad behaviours.” Moreover, I think you cannot say “our lifes”, you should say “our lives.” All in all, I am looking forward to read your next journals.
Affectionately :)