13 Haziran 2013 Perşembe

RESISTANCE

                       
       Today, in our country, we are having some experience about our lifes. Because of the “Gezi parkı” in Taksim, some people just protest the government so that they can not build a shopping mall there. The protest increased and spread all over the country. Millions of people were on the streets and some people thought that this was just because of Gezi Parkı. When we looked at the streets, we heard kitchenware sounds, people were screaming, etc. It looks like a chaos. When you see it deeply, you understand that this is not just because of Gezi Parkı. This is all about human life and freedom of people. Every people in protests, has a reason for protest against government. Some of them are here because of their sexual choice, some them are here because of their low salary, some them are here because of limitation of alcohol sale. Person who drinks alcohol is here, person who sells alcohol is here. Whole society has a reason for being here. When we see this crowd, we understand just one thing: freedom is our aorta. Maybe some can touch it, push it, but when it comes at the end of some’s rope, whole people go out.
       When we look at them, we can see fellowship between people. There is no bad behaviors, there is no fights, there is no anger. Every one of society knows why he is here. Because he does not want to be limited. Only angry person in the country is on the television and calls people “çapulcu”. It shows that this people are on the right way.
       In this world, every people has his own decision mechanism and every people should protect his freedom of thought. If he doesnt resist any of the borders, one day he will realize that he cant move

1 yorum:

  1. Dear Evren,

    Firstly, I would like to say that I really enjoyed while reading your entry. You have mentioned a good point. You provided everybody an opportunity to know what happened in Turkey. Also, you have stated protesters’ aim explicitly. Moreover, you have a nice style of writing. Namely, you have developed your ideas in an organized way, with paragraphs. There are no irrelevant sentences. With respect to your language use, there are some mistakes I would like to state. “Chaos” is an uncountable noun, so you can’t use it with the article “a”. You said “There is no bad behaviors” ,and it should be “There are no bad behaviours.” Moreover, I think you cannot say “our lifes”, you should say “our lives.” All in all, I am looking forward to read your next journals.
    Affectionately :)

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